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Olivia Rowland leaves her Midwestern life behind after graduating from college and heads off to Los Angeles to work for a Hollywood talent agent. Life in L.A. is a culture shock, but nothing compared to the jolt she gets when Max enters her life.Max Dalton is Hollywood's youngest and brightest movie producer/director/writer. He's wealthy, successful, hot, and there's neverOlivia Rowland leaves her Midwestern life behind after graduating from college and heads off to Los Angeles to work for a Hollywood talent agent. Life in L.A. is a culture shock, but nothing compared to the jolt she gets when Max enters her life.Max Dalton is Hollywood's youngest and brightest movie producer/director/writer. He's wealthy, successful, hot, and there's never a shortage of women throwing themselves at him, but there’s only one woman he wants, and he intends to make it happen.As Max pursues Olivia, he finds that she presents a whole new challenge for him. When Olivia finally gives in the stage is set for a perilous, yet passionate relationship. Together they discover each other’s deepest desires, and darkest secrets.Erotic Romance novella | Approx. 22,000 words*AUTHOR'S NOTE: This ebook is no longer being published as an individual book. You can find all 3 novellas in this series combined in 1 book -->> Fade....

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fade into you Reviews

  • Optimist ♰King's Wench♰ & MANTIES Champion
    2019-06-07 16:54

    What to Well I will say that Sylvia Day deserves some royalties of this thing. A shocking amount of it is a hare's breath away from plagiarism & the parts that aren't aren't all that interesting. The dialogue is prosaic. Their relationship lacks depth & heat for that matter. There are parts of it that are downright laughable they're so cheesy. Olivia has moved to LA after a harrowing experience with her long term boyfriend in Ohio. Well, it takes her all of about 3 seconds to get "swept away" by Max & shun all her inhibitions & all of about 10 seconds later she's spilling her guts to the guy that for all intents & purposes treated her like a common whore. So much for boundaries, huh? And she says she's built a fortress around herself complete with a moat. Yeah. right. sure. And I've got some ocean front property in Arizona, wanna buy it?Max seems to have as much depth as a puddle & I'm going to be a total bitch here & say the guy drinks white russians. Heeeellllllllllooooooooo, 1987 called & they'd like their libation of choice back. Thanks. I'm sure the next installment will somehow manufacture some sort of backstory on the guy & I'll be perfectly honest & say I'm gonna be a masochist & subject myself to the next 2, mainly because I see they were both published prior to Reflected in You so I'm wondering where she got her material from for them. Perhaps it might be original? Fingers crossed.....

  • Karolina
    2019-06-20 15:51

    What did I just read?To sum it up, there was absolutely no zero meaningful conversation very little[image error]and for all 70 pages sure as hell loads of this That's all folks!

  • ~ Becs ~
    2019-06-04 15:51

    By the end of the day I was completely enthralled with Max Dalton, and I had no idea how much pleasure and pain it would bring me in the coming months.Sounds promising right? Well, the rest of this novella doesn’t really live up to that exciting quote – let’s hope for greater things in the sequels.Olivia has left her cheating, abusive boyfriend behind in her Podunk town where her parents wanted her to marry and procreate with the cheating, abusive boyfriend and headed to tinsel town to forge a career working for a casting agency. She attends a meeting with Max, big time Oscar nominated producer, and her jaw falls wide open and she gapes, unashamedly, at his masculine beauty. She’s blinded by him.Max pursues her. Of course he does and they share a dazzling one night stand and then, as Olivia is still coming down from her orgasmic high, Max ushers her out, takes her home and that appears to be that. What an arrogant, slimebag sleazeball!He does eventually crawl back with the lame excuse that he is just used to treating women that way but I found it extremely hard to warm up to him. He’d definitely improved by the second half of the novella and I think I was starting to see the hero that Kate Dawes wants us to see but she sure made it hard.There’s a mild blip of a suspense plot involving the cheating, abusive ex-boyfriend but it’s a blink and you miss it moment just giving Max the chance to throw a few punches and look macho.This is very short and there’s not much character or plot development although we do manage a few sizzling sex scenes. I found it hard to see either Max or Olivia in my imagination and it all felt rather rushed. I think this needed to be much longer but I see the potential and so I’m going straight onto the sequel.3 stars contemporary romanceFor more reviews, please visit Sinfully Sexy Book Reviews

  • Elizabeth
    2019-06-15 18:51

    Such an unlikable female character. The only time I related to her was when she was partying with her roommate, Krystal. Typing this, I actually forgot the female character's name. That oughta tell you something. However, Max is the male lead's name. When he said he had baggage, I was expecting something more traumatic, or even DRAMATIC, than what it is. Really, you are tired of meeting superficial gold diggers for one night stands, so you treat all women as superficial gold diggers for one night stands? That is his excuse for treating what's her name badly. Um, I would totally not buy that bullshit. If he wanted his dating life to change, there are ways to acheive this. As for who's it's baggage, ol' girl had nothing but a cheating ex. yes, they had an intense fight, but NOTHING actually happened. I did not see her as strong, but weak if something as (literally) EVERYDAY as that has her running away to L.A. and vowing off men. Weak and cowardly. Also, there is not enough dialogue, or relationship development for me to believe that these two cooky kids are in love. I will list their encounters: business meeting; he runs into her in Vegas, not a lot of talking, just a kiss good night; he digitally pleasures her in his office, without saying much; they do the nasty and he sends her home, without talking much; he comes by her house to talk about baggage (ha!) and leaves. That a passionate love affair does not make. I may read the sequels, only because I have already downloaded them with the first one, and I may run out of others to read (not likely, bc I have a NOOK and a KINDLE). I don't recommend these at all. Please save your money. If you want something like Christian Grey, then I suggest you read the FIFTY SHADES trilogy again.

  • Pam Godwin
    2019-06-11 14:37

    This first novella in the Fade series is a buildup of flirting, seduction, and celebrity male hotness, resulting in the wham-bam-shove-her-out-the-door-ma'am. There's not much to this story beyond the steamy scenes. In the end, Max claims Olivia is different from all his other conquests, yet there is no meaningful dialogue or profundity in their interactions to contribute to this supposed uniqueness. When they unload their baggage, my reaction was indifferent because their problems seemed superficial and self-induced. KD's ostensive writing style lent itself to this quick heated story, and I might have been content with the novella being just that if the character and plot depth hadn't felt so forced.

  • I ♥ Bookie Nookie (
    2019-06-01 15:29

    What a fantastic little gem of a read! FADE INTO YOU is romantic and sexy and I just love the characters. Olivia is a strong and independent female lead and Max is a dominant and commanding hero, but not in an obnoxious way - I love them both and I am starting book 2 immediately because I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!✳✳ Copy provided by the author/publisher for an honest review.✳✳ Reviewed on I ♥ Bookie Nookie Reviews___________________________________________________If you like this type of book, you might enjoy one of these groups. Check us out!Menage ReadersErotic EnchantsBookie Nookie's Erotic Lending Group

  • Kenya Wright
    2019-06-01 15:36

    Damn It! Oh man I was excited to read this! So So So excited. . . but I guess it left me wanting. It could be that I over thought when I read this.I didn't get why the guy was attracted to her. He's in hollywood. There's hundreds of sexy women.I didn't feel a connection with the main character.However, the sex scenes were good.

  • Ella
    2019-05-23 12:29

    Cover: Uh...huh?My Rating: 90/100Overall: Loved itPage Turner: YesRecommend: MATURE READERS ONLYCOMMENTS: I love Max. Love him. How he protected her from Chris is just the best. I'm liking their story, I want to continue.

  • Amber Rose
    2019-06-15 16:30

    I liked this one, I wanted to like it more, but it was too short maybe. The characters seemed to bring their issues out quickly to my liking. The sex sense were quite good but maybe the next book will be better hopefully. I might hold off though for a little while.

  • Sarah's Book Blog
    2019-05-23 17:28

    This was a really really great novella. I thought for $.99 on my kindle, why not. I love trilogies, love anything like the Fifty Shades/Crossfire series. The characters are so easy to like, don't aggravate you and they get right to the point...LOVE IT

  • Funzee Shu
    2019-06-08 19:56

    Konon kabarnya buku ini ckp 'menghebohkan'.....Isinya cukup 'panas' dan bikin 'mendamba'....Setipe ma 'fifty' yg menghebohkan itu loh....Penasaran dong....Secara kan emang lg trend cerita model2 si Fifty,ada Bared,ada Anything....well besok entah apa lagi....Sebenarnya ini novella....Cz ceritanya pendek2 per bukunya,setipelah ama Anything yg ebook-nya mpe 5 seri itu loh....Nah,ini ga jauh beda....Tapi cuma 3 ebook sajah,kemudian di rilis dlm bentuk paperback dg juduL "Fade".Fade into You merupakan seri pertama dari trilogy 'Fade'....Kisahnya sendiri sih stereotip yah...Pria handsome kaya tipe alfa dominan yg naksir dg gadis 'biasa' dg bumbu kisah cinta yg menggairahkan,kisah masa lalu yg kelam,trauma.....dan para mantans (⌒˛⌒) (view spoiler)[Sakit hati karena penghianatan kekasihnya yang selingkuh dengan 3 wanita sekaligus,Olivia memutuskan untuk hengkang dari kota kelahirannya Ohio dan memutuskan untuk mengadu nasib ke Hollywood.Di Hollywood, Olivia bekerja sebagai pegawai dari talent agency ternama pimpinan Kevin.Kebetulan salah satu artis di bawah naungan agency nya bakal di casting menjadi salah satu pemeran utama wanita dalam film terbaru besutan sutradara muda berbakat dan jenius bernama Max Dalton.Max Dalton ini di gambarin sebagai pria muda akhir 20’an, yang berkharisma, rambut setengah gondrong, cakep, di gilai wanita2, cassanova juga, produser, sutradara bertangan dingin sekaligus penulis handal.Film2nya selalu masuk jajaran box office dan mendapat nominasti Oscar. WOW !!!!!Keduanya akhirnya bertemu karena urusan pekerjaan.Awal pertemuan, Olivia sudah terpesona pada sosok Max ini, fantasinya pun bermacam2,hehehehe…Di lain pihak, ternyata Max juga merasakan ketertarikan aneh yang sama terhadap Olivia ini.Akhir pekan, Krystal, temen seapartemen Oliva yang juga teman kakaknya sekampung halaman, mengajaknya liburan ke Vegas.Dengan enggan, Olivia pun menemani Krystal.Mereka menikmati bermain judi kecil2an di salah satu Casino di sana.Tanpa di duga, ternyata Max Dalton juga tengah bermain judi di sana.Olivia berniat ‘mengabaikan’ Max kala itu, namun apa daya, Max melihatnya dan mengajaknya bergabung ke meja nya dan meminta Olivia berdiri di dekatnya, menjadi “Dewi Keberuntungannya”.Max menang banyak malam itu, dan mengajak Olivia minum2 di bar dekat Casino, lalu bersikeras mengantarnya kembali ke kamar hotel.Dan seperti yang bisa di duga,sodara-sodara…..Max pun melancarkan “rayuannya”, dari Cuma berdiri di ambang pintu sampe sukses masuk ke dalam kamar,hehehehe….Nyaris saja terjadi hal-hal yang di inginkan kalau saja KrystaL tidak masuk pada saat yang “tepat”, mendapati Max dan Olivia berada dalam “keadaan yang mencurigakan” (Lah, kok jadi kek HR begini penggambarannya).Krystal yang ga enak hati benernya udah bersiap untuk hengkang dari kamar, tapi di larang oleh Olivia.Olivia memakai kehadiran Krystal untuk mengakhiri keinginan Max.Alhasil, Max pun harus meninggalkan kamar Olivia dalam keadaan “mendamba” dan “keras”, hahahahaha…..Max pun berlalu dari hadapan Olivia di iringi dengan kata-kata, ” I’m not giving up on you, Olivia.”Cieeeee……..Esok nya ketika check out dari hotel, Olivia melihat Max di loby hotel bersama wanita pirang cantik yang Nampak sekali menunjukan ketertarikannya pada Max.Olivia merasa cemburu….Tapi, siapa dia berani sok-sok’an jealous ??Olivia pun meninggalkan lobby dg perih di dada….Well, he’s too high to reach, Olivia….Krystal mengingatkan Olivia untuk jangan terlalalu berharap banyak pada situasi ini.Bekerja di dunia hiburan seperti Hollywood, Olivia harus tahan banting dan tahan goda’an. Jangan sampai terjerumus dan terluka, lagi….Wise juga nih si Krystal.Dalam suatu kesempatan, Max sengaja meminta Olivia datang ke kantornya – alone – buat tanda tangan kontrak dg salah satu artis agency nya.Tak melewatkan kesempatan emas, Max pun langsung melancarkan rayuan mautnya, Olivia di petting sampe come di sofa kantornya, abis tu udah…Max dengan santainya memakaikan kembali pakaian Olivia sambil bilang,”Ini yang bakal lo dapet kalo kita fucking….”Bwaahahahahahaaa…..ngiklaaaaan diaaa….“Next time we won’t be rushed, and I’m going to take my timefucking you.”“When exactly is next time?”“I think I’ll let it be a surprise.” Balas Max,Olivia bergidik di buatnya….Akhir pekan berikutnya, Krystal mengajak Olivia menemaninya ke salah satu Klub kenamaan di Holywood, tempat para artis nmgumpul.Di sana Olivia di kenalkan pada dua teman Krystal, Julia dan Rachel.Keduanya berpenampilan glamour layaknya artis, meski faktanya sih bukan, hehehehe…Cz mereka tipe cewek2 yg mencari “mangsa” kekasih kaya dari kalangan artis dan kaum Jet set Hollywood.Ketika mereka tengah asyik membicarakan pria2 hot kalangan Hollywood, tiba2 Max muncul di sana.Julia dan Rachel mulai membicarakan berbagai rumors mengenai kehidupan sex Max.“Total womanizer,” kata Julia.Ketika Olivia bilang dia pernah sekali bertatap muka dg Max, baik Julia maupun Rachel memandang tak percaya padanya, piker mereka, mana mungkin seorang Max mau meluangkan waktu utk hanya sekedar ngobrol dg Olivia ?Ketika Max berjalan kearah mereka, dan langsung menghampiri Olivia, shock lah keduanya.Apalagi Max meminta ijin utk “menculik” Olivia, dan meninggalkan bar berdua bersamanya.Tinggal Krystal yang senyum2 puas, hehehehehe….Max mengajak Olivia langsung ke rumahnya di kawasan elite Malibu.Dan langsung “menyerbu” Olivia ketika keduanya sampai di dalam rumah, si Max udah ga sabar rupanya, hahahahaha….Maka terjadilah apa yang seharusnya memang terjadi….Uhuk2nya cukup bikin mendamba loh…Si Max ni demen banget lick2, dan beng2nya juga di gambarkan selalu siap tegak dalam posisi tempur,heheheheheKeduanya pun sama2 terpuaskan….“That was amazing,” Max said.“The best.” Said Olivia.WOW !!!Tapi sayangnya,kelar uhuk2 si Max langsung nganter Olivia pulang, gada acara nginep2an.Olivia pun merasa jadi cewek murahan, salah satu mainan Max di kala butuh.How could I have been so stupid? So gullible? Why had I let my guard down?Why had I let a man use and control me like that?Fuck! I knew better!Olivia pun teringat akan perlakuan mantannya yang menyakitkan hati.Tidak kah pengalaman menyakitkanya dengan Chris Cooper cukup membuat nya waspada ??Bukankah gara2 Chris juga, Olivia sampai harus membangun berlapis-lapis benteng untuk melindungi perasaannya dari para pria ?Namun kenapa semua benteng itu langsung roboh ketika berhadapan dengan sosok Max ??Yang jelas2 Olivia tahu reputasi playboy nya tiada duanya !Olivia membangun kuburannya sendiri bila ia tetap berada di dekat Max dan jatuh dalam pesonanya !Tak ingin mengalami luka yang sama, Olivia pun bersiap memasang kembali benteng nya yang runtuh.Ketika seminggu berlalu tanpa satu pun kabar dari Max, tak urung juga Olivia merana….Ketika Krystal tahu apa yang terjadi antara Max dan Olivia,Krystal hanya memberikannya tatapan “Gue bilang juga apa !”Namun ga men-Judge Olivia lebih jauh.Masalah ga berhenti di seputaran Max aja, cz kehidupan Olivia kembali di ganggu dengan kehadiran Chris, mantannya yang ga trima di putus ama Olivia dan meneror kehidupan Olivia.Itu salah satu alasan Olivia memilih meninggalkan kampung halamannya, demi menghindar dari Chris.Max mengirimi Olivia selusin bunga mawar dan mengajak ketemuan, “Kangen” katanya.Tapi Olivia sudah bertekat untuk menjauh dari Max.Ketika Olivia menolak ajakan Max per telpon, Max tak hilang akal.Dia langsung mendatangi apartemen Olivia, mencari tahu kenapa tiba2 sikap Olivia berubah, menjauh darinya…Olivia bilang kalau dia masih belum sanggup menjalin hubungan dengan pria….lagi….Olivia mengungkapkan kalau dia punya beban tersendiri…masalah dari masa lalunya, dan dia tak ingin menambah kacau kehidupanya dg masalah baru, masalah percintaan.Nah, pada poin ini gw mulai suka ama karakter Max, ternyata dia jenis pria yang mau “mendengarkan”….Dia mendesak Olivia utk menjelaskan masalahnya,dan mendengarkan dengan seksama.Max bahkan menyatakan kalau ia sebenarnya juga hidup menanggung beban masa lalu.“I’ll tell you,” he said. “And I’ll go first. I’ll share with you if you share with me.” “I’m not going to lie….”Sweet banget deh pas di sini…Akhirnya keduanya pun saling membuka masa lalu masing2.Ketika Olivia menceritakan perihal mantannya yang stalker dan pernah memukulinya, Max pun berang.(Hmm, jd berasa DejaVu dengan adegan di Gabriel’s Inferno yah, hahahahaha)Max pun menjanjikan sebuah hubungan yang baru.Max ingin memulai hubungan mereka kembali dari awal, dari date pertama….yang normal di jalankan oleh sepasang kekasih.Lalu pamit pulang, dam berjanji esok akan menjemput Olivia utk kencan pertama mereka….Uh, soooo sweet deh si Max ini…Hati Olivia pun berbunga-bunga di buatnya…Ketika 10 menit kemudian terdengar suara ketukan di pintu, Olivia lantas membukanya dengan segera, karena di kiranya itu Max.Namun apa yang di lihat nya membuat bulu kuduknya meremang.Chris berdiri di ambang pintunya….Bagaimana mungkin Chris bisa tahu tempat tinggalnya ?? Bagaimana Chris bisa menemukannya ??!!Kepanikan melanda Olivia ketika Chris berusaha masuk ke dalam rumahnya.Namun Max datang tepat waktu dan menghajar Chris habis2an…Merasa keamanan Olivia terancam,Max pun meminta Olivia pindah ke rumahnya malam itu juga.Keesokan harinya, Max mengajak Olivia berakhir pekan di tempat yg masih di rahasiakan.“It’s a surprise.” (hide spoiler)]So far.....Karakter Max mayan jg sih,meski awalnya agak ga suka,tp ntar lama2 bakalan suka jg kok.....Dia tipe care protective ke cewek nya.....dan sweet....Dan Olivia....yg awalnya gw kira tipe 'oste',ternyata ga oste2 amat kok....=TBC Fade into Me=

  • Gabriela
    2019-06-13 17:36

    The first of a three part series of novellas, that the author should have really tried to invest more time in developing the characters and give you more details. So many times the writer let Olivia just tell you how an event happened rather then spending the time to write the event out.. so you miss so much details and only seem to get one side of the story.. only through Olivia`s eyes. The actual story line had potential yet it was lacking in suspense and action as well as romance since you never seem to feel like you got the full picture. I think all three books should have just been made into one really good one. But you are forced to read the next two just so that you are not left hanging.

  • ♥ ᔕαmi
    2019-06-10 13:56

    Ok, so this was a nice little story. The main female character was a little bland but you grew to like her. It annoyed me a little that she was so easily swayed to do anything she was told to do, but hey, thats her gig i guess. It was a short book and i found myself finishing it in 1 day, not a bad thing but doesnt give me time to love any of the characters. Will read the rest of the series but im going to need a filler book between each one so i dont end up throttling the main char :-)

  • Denise
    2019-06-07 11:55

    After reading the Fifty shades trilogy and The first 2 books if the Crossfire trilogy, I had hoped for something more substantial in this book that what it turned out to be.Fifty Shades has been criticised for the writing, but that was nothing compared to this. I had no emotional attachment to the characters in this book where I most definitely did with Ana & Christian and Eva & Gideon.I won't be buying the other 2 books in the series.

  • Kimberly
    2019-06-09 19:52

    I officially give this book a RATING OF 3.3First off, I come with (compared to this book) high expectations from fifty shade and crossfire, when reading the summary, I was BUMMED OUT that the steamy hot guy was a stupid Hollywood producer/writer...that was hot when I was in like seventh grade! But then I turned 14 and got over it!

  • J *deep in the heart of Texas*
    2019-06-15 19:38

    I guess I'm just not really a fan of novellas...this was decent. I liked Max but with a novella and a three part one at that--just as you get in to the story and start to feel a connection to the characters the book ends. Granted book 2 picks up right where book 1 left off but why not just make it one book?!?! Guess we'll see where the story goes.....

  • Kristen
    2019-06-12 12:30

    a quick fantasy erotic romance. I completed it in a couple hours. I enjoyed it. I down loaded the next two to see what happens. It's def a cut to the chase type of book. Dives right in, my only complaint is and that you don't know a whole lot about the characters(in the 1st book anyway) but I appreciate the jumping to the sex parts(lol) haha

  • Sassafrass
    2019-06-04 18:46

    This is definitely a hot beginning to this trilogy. I can not wait to see what's going to happen next. I can see how Olivia would be totally swept away by Max and his commanding side. I will immediately have to go into book 2 to see what's going to happen next!

  • Paris
    2019-05-31 19:30

    3.5I like Max and Olivia. They were definitely super hot together and there were a ton of scorching intimate scenes between them in these books. Even read back to back to back the story seemed a little short, but it was a really cute romance and I'm glad I gave them a shot.

  • Jen
    2019-06-14 15:29

    Just write one fucking book already! This whole each chapter was a separate book shit pissed me off. The story was already cheesy and poorly written, but that shit was just annoying! I do not recommend this series!!!

  • Carroll
    2019-05-23 17:49

    This book series was suggested in one of my book groups and im glad i read them. I read all 3 today and really enjoyed them. Yes they were short which would be the only down fault of them, but thats me being selfish and wanted more because i couldnt put them down.

  • Alana
    2019-06-13 11:49

    I really wanted to like this book series unfortunately it felt very "highschool". I really tried, it lacked a lot of maturity and depth.

  • Chrisabel
    2019-05-28 13:53

    Wow!!!! This was a crazy sexy read. I only paid $.99 and it was just so good. I will be downloading the whole series. So glad I found this series....

  • Breann McGrath
    2019-05-26 16:47

    Super easy read! I liked the book but I think Max was a little too quick in his approach to Olivia. It moved rather fast but the end of the book was nice.

  • Yulia
    2019-05-22 17:38

    It was okay, but I didn't enjoy it that much.I think this book is better for pasing the time.

  • Jordan
    2019-06-18 16:52

    This book just didn't do it for me. Super cheesy I have loved all of the erotic novels that I have read lately and this one just didn't add up.

  • Dana
    2019-05-25 19:49

    Read all 3 of the books in this series... They were $1 each on Kindle and so worth it(i would have paid more) They were short but very good! Didnt take long to read them. Wish there was more!

  • Katie Gens
    2019-05-31 18:30

    Good story but too short. I like a whole book, not just a few chapters.

  • Christie«SHBBblogger»
    2019-06-19 18:29

    This is one HOT read! Woo! On to book two.

  • Kandise
    2019-05-20 11:28

    Wait. What?! Question: Is this to be expected from all books labeled "erotica"? Cause this is not a fictional tale of two people, it's a manuscript for a porno. It is seriously a porno written down...yeah, like before they act it out and your helping them commit their lines to memory. No, it is. Don't believe me? Well then go ahead and take and hour of your day and read'll only take an hour or so, if that...cause it's only 40 some odd pages...just do it and get back to me.Those who harumphed and humphed about how poorly written 50 Shades was, never laid their eyes on this little gem. The characters have zero depth and there isn't even a storyline...*shrug* well not one that makes any sense any way. Shit just happens. Inconsequential characters are introduced. Equally insignificant dialog takes place. People show up. People are rescued in the same millisecond (talk about being in the right place at the right time huh?)...****************************************************At one point I believe Liv answered the door to a "UPS" guy wearing silver aviators, sporting an untamed curly fro and donning brown 1970's basketball shorts and a 3/4 buttoned down brown dress shirt that was not without the sexiest tuft of chest fro and holding a package a little too close to his person, says "Good day ma'am, I'm here to deliver this package" Then confused Olivia pouted, tilted her head slightly to the right with finger placed thoughtfully to her chin replied "hmmm, I don't remember ordering anything..." and the UPS guy said "Oh, so you didn't order this GI-GAN-TIC COCK in a box?!" whilst holding firmly on to that conveniently placed package thrusting his hips into it and biting his bottom lip (no doubt showing her what exactly that package could do!) Then surprised Olivia turned to Max and gasped "Oh Max, did you order me this cock?! You are so kind! It wasn't even my birthday! I just knew it was love at first sight! After only 24 hours, you have infiltrated that oh so impenetrable wall I constructed! And I am still absolutely astounded that you know me so well Max!" and then the UPS guy replied "Well aren't you one lucky lady, all I need is a signature right here...oh, you don't have a pen? It's ok, I have one right here (gesturing to his cock of which he is firmly gripping and stroking with his hands) and you can just sign with your pussy!" then Olivia bit the tip of her finger, turned to Max with a devilish smile and said "It's a good thing I'm ambidextrous cause I'm definitely going to need two pens!"...and then the party gets started! Whooo!Ok. Maybe it didn't happen, but if it did I probably would have given it three stars if it did...maybe.**************************************************Olivia claims to have built this fortress around her heart, but three chapters in she's getting fingered in Max Dalton's office (and three chapters ain't alotta time honey) who would have thought that in reality that "fortress" turned out to be constructed out of a couple of decks of playing cards on a flimsy poker table? And who knew that the sheer force of a massive, ungodly sized erection could knock those cards right on off that table?...I assure you, I did not.Everything is just rushed, one second they are like "I got baggage" and the next they are like "Now that we've unpacked that baggage and completely glossed over the fact that we were cautious a second and me belong together...I could tell you were different since the first time we almost had sex after knowing each other for 2.5 miliseconds...cause that in no way qualifies as a one night stand" Please. Get da fuck outta hee-a!Now on to book two...What? Don't judge me, it's only 40-something pages and my wrist-twitch syndrome is dormant...and the "erotic" is good.